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The Rule Breaker in You and Me

9/15/2015

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I can't remember if I've talked about this in the past, but if I did, it was probably only in passing. For this post, though, I intend to be more "in-depth" with my take on writing violations - or things that we are NORMALLY told not to do when writing.
Babala - I mean, Disclaimer: I am writing this post, knowing that I probably won't finish my work for tonight, to earn some good karma points from God. :D I don't know why, but I feel like I should mention this.
Disclaimer #2: EVERYTHING I SHARE HERE IS WHAT WORKED FOR ME. I am not saying it's right. I am not saying it will help you succeed. I am not saying it will help you at all. If you have nothing nice to say, I'm one of those terribly proper people who think it's then better for you not to say nothing at all. 
Back when I was querying for an agent and hoping to get my book published by a traditional publisher, I made sure to play by the rules. I believed - then - that following the rules was the ONLY and RIGHT thing to do.
When I switched to indie publishing, however, I gradually found myself experimenting and, yes, deliberately breaking rules that I felt I had to break because of how I want to write. And to my surprise, the experiments seem to pay off. I'd like to think they did pay off, but I also think these rule-breaking experiments worked in my favor because I knew I was breaking the rules. I had the chance to discuss this with a fellow Filipino writer (and editor), and she was the one who opened my eyes to this, actually. She told me (this is not verbatim) that there's a major difference between writers who deliberately violate certain writing principles AND writers who make the same mistakes out of inexperience or ignorance. 

SHOW VS. TELL

I used to be really, really, really, really in favor of this rule, to the point that I've never acknowledged (in my mind, at least) the possibility that sometimes, more tell vs. show would ever work. But then I started writing My Dutch Billionaire 1, and I just knew that I had to do a lot of telling. I just...had to. There's a kind of intimacy when you do more telling versus showing, almost like a diary that comes to life just for your eyes, and even though I knew it could likely cause my book to be a huge flop, I took the risk anyway.
And I'd like to think it paid off, since the book got me back on Amazon's overall list for Top 100 Movers & Shakers as well as giving me a temporary spot on Amazon's top 100 contemporary romance authors (which, I promise, is even harder to do these days if you're not in KU).
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More "tell vs. show" was something I deliberately chose to do because - as you see from the review above - the love story between my H/h started when the girl was very young (14!) and the guy was - here goes - 28! So, yes, double her age! In hindsight, I realize now that one of the primary reasons "tell vs. show" worked is because the heroine's age made her lack the kind of maturity and experience needed to articulate her feelings for the hero in a way that would satisfy readers. And so I had to "step in" and tell. 
We can, of course, argue about skipping this part of their relationship entirely and just go straight to the part where she's old enough to show her side of the story. We could...but I didn't. Because I felt that this part of their story is integral and I personally believe that it's something my readers would appreciate. 

FORMULAIC plots

Here's the thing. Other writers may think or even call you a hack to your face. Others may think you're uninspired and lacking in creativity. Others may say that your writing's crap, purely because you have a formula.
But here's the other thing. A lot of readers - and I'm like this, as a reader - have favorite authors because they know their expectations will be met. And that's what you're trying to satisfy when using a formula.
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See? Even my readers know I have a formula. Also, see what happens when I stray little from my usual formula? :D
It took a couple of bad experiments for me to STOP FEELING GUILTY about ENJOYING my writing when I use my favorite formula. The penny-dropping moment for me came when I read a book from a certain favorite author and it was NOT what I expected at all. Made me feel so depressed and disappointed, and eventually I realized that this is what would happen if I let other people's opinions sway me from writing what I like to write - and what MY readers like to read. 

prologues

Another thing I stayed away from big time when I wasn't self-publishing was PROLOGUES. 
For most people, prologues are unnecessary and even a means to feed one's ego at times (I guess it's because some people use a lot of deep / flowery words in prologues). 
But here's another thing. I really like prologues. I think it's a great way to introduce a character's background without slowing down the rest of the story.
So when I started self-publishing, you can bet your ass I started writing prologues as well. And I'd like to think it works because my prologues have a purpose.
Purpose #1: Readers get to KNOW your characters.
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Purpose #2: To make your readers FEEL.
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head-hopping

Basically, it's when you change POVs within the same scene. A lot of people hate it - authors, editors, publishers - but, weirdly enough, it's something that my favorite authors do. Judith McNaught is one of my Top 5 all-time favorite authors and I can honestly say that her books have influenced my writing a lot. She never failed to make me fall in love with her characters, never failed to make me cry. I loved the banter between her H/h and I loved the way she made her heroes grovel. 
Another is Lynne Graham, my #1 go-to Harlequin Presents / Mills and Boon author. She does a lot of head-hopping, too and I love it.
There's also Christine Feehan, with her Carpathian series. I absolutely adore the way her characters are able to communicate telepathically and yes, that's a head-hopping scene, too.
BUT again, I avoided doing this because I knew I'd have a hard time convincing agents / editors to even give my manuscript a chance the moment they see one head-hopping scene. In fact, this was what led me to write most of my early manuscripts in first person.
And then I started to self-publish, took the risk in writing the way I really want to write, and I'd like to think this also paid off.
One of the more frequent / common similarities among reviews of my books is where you see a reader actually commenting about my "writing style", which I believe pertains to my head-hopping POVs. 
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I honestly believe by "original" she means the head-hopping, thing. :D And notice that this review also mentioned my writing (style). Normally, you see readers only commenting about the story and characters. 
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Another common similarity is how my readers LIKE that they know what the characters are feeling / thinking ATM. I 
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BAD REVIEWS

Here's what I think. We are our own worst critics. If we're not the type to indulge in self-delusions then we'll be able to know right away when something's not working. So there's no need to read bad reviews. I don't know about you, but every one or two-star review I read about my book (I try to avoid doing so, but sometimes it's just so hard to ignore) HURTS me. It also affects me at times, to the point of crippling my ability to write. 
So really, the less negativity, the better. Avoid reading bad reviews. 
Remember: a bad review only means your book got into the wrong hands. 

AND SO YOUR POINT IS?

Rules were made to be broken. 
No, not really. :D I'm kidding. 
The point is, it's essential that we take our time to hone our craft. To study the basics so that we have the right foundation to "build" our stories on. It's only by knowing what these rules are and understanding why they're there that we can effectively determine for ourselves if all these rules are something we should adhere to when writing. 
So NO, I AM NOT ENCOURAGING YOU AT ALL TO BREAK THE GOLDEN RULES OF WRITING. 
What I am saying is that if you do intentionally break a rule (meaning, you know you're breaking one) and you do it because you feel it's right (meaning, you understand why the rule exists but you also believe your story can't be told properly without breaking the rule) then go for it.
It's your story, and it has to be told the way you envision it.
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Writing Rule Violation #1 The Internet with a small i

7/30/2015

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Confession: I used to be something like a teacher's pet when I was querying agents. I followed the rules rigorously and didn't even think there was an alternative to it. 
However...when I started self-publishing, I have to say that's when I've really found my voice. I've made conscious decisions to break certain rules, and I don't regret doing so because, in a way, those "violations" are also what made my writing distinct from other people's works, in good and bad ways (subject to personal opinion of critics, reviewers, and readers).
That said, we come back to this new mini-series of posts that I thought would benefit you guys. If you're like me when I first started, you have this bone-deep need to please everyone with your writing - to the point that you'll end up losing sight of what you want to say with your story and how you want to say it. 
Note: The Writing Rule Violations series is for you to see the alternative to blindly following the usual rules for writing. It is NOT meant to encourage you to violate them.

First, here's an in-depth analysis of whether or not to capitalize the first letter of the Internet.
But for those who don't have the time to do so, the long and short is that for as long as dictionaries continue spelling the Internet with a capital I, style guides like AP will most likely follow suit. 
What does this mean for you?
If you want to be technically correct with your writing, you need to use capital I. 
If you don't care to be technically correct, then feel free to spell 'Internet' with a small i since people who actually do this also have a valid argument for their decision.
Up to you!
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